Re: Sentence Correction Q
MOTU,
(A) is the correct answer for two reasons:
First, in (B) "their" is ambiguous.
Second, in (B) the parallelism between "their" and "that" is not grammatical. I.e. the form: "not so much their X as that Y" is incorrect. The proper form is: "not so much that X as that Y.
Hope that helped.
JEM
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